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Re: Goodbye
You really know how to mean something without actually saying what you mean...does that make sense? Well anyways I liked this. For some reason that tree reminded me of Adonis, ...
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Re: Hazel
This is the prologue of a story I worked on for english class a couple of years ago. I will post the first chapter after I get some feedback on ...
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Re: My Brother Has A Gun
This was was short but amazing. I'm speechless...wow!! :cry: Keep up the good work
Mar 4, 2008 -
Re: True thoughts
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Re: I Think I'm In Love #3
This was great, which i knew it would be. I'm happy that things are getting better for her and her dad. Her mom's coming home? wow i can't wait to ...
Feb 16, 2008 -
Re: Young Writer's Dream
This is so a writer I feel the same way. What made this poem perfect was the rhyming it was synchronized...perfect...great job!!!
Feb 16, 2008 -
Re: I Think I'm In Love #2
wow I loved this!!! This is better, I mean I really really want to read more. Emily's dad is such a jerk...well anyways keep writing you're doing great. You portrayed ...
Feb 16, 2008 -
Re: The children with no name
I like the way you started strong and ended strong. It was like a small book where I got everything I needed to know. I could picture a black and ...
Feb 13, 2008 -
Re: I Think I'm In Love #1
Hey BBB!!! Well I loved this but yet there was one little problem. I am a girl and I think that if I were this girl I wouldn't go around ...
Feb 13, 2008 -
Re: I Fear thee whom I loved
I am reading Twilight right now finally, and this just popped in my head. I Fear thee who I loved By Angel of Death I fear thee who I loved ...
Feb 13, 2008 -
Re: Heroes Storybook
Genevieve: Beijing, China Night swept over Beijing as Topaz crept through the city. Rats scurried around in the alley ways, and the smell of rice and spices filled the air. ...
Jan 4, 2008 -
Re: Heroes Storybook
Genevieve/Topaz Lauren I perused the circled information slowly, and then looked up at my father. He was standing with his arms behind his back, with a worried expression on his ...
Jan 3, 2008 -
Re: Cupid's Arrow Ch. 2
Chapter 2 Change of Plans The tall, dark, trees hovered above the forest floor, staring at Esperanza as she wandered through the forest. The howling of the wind and the ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Heroes Storybook
Name: Alicia Jones Topaz Lauren* / Seine Michel */Genevieve Lavoisier** Age: 16 Gender: Female Location: Paris, France Hair: Black Eyes: Golden Brown Occupation: Spy/ waitress at a coffee shop General
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Smile (I Am Leaving)
I like this, it's crazy but I like rap music so when I read this I can actually hear it on the radio.
Jan 1, 2008
